Before writing, list 3–4 standout transformations (e.g., marsh → housing, woodland → golf course) to feature in your overview.


Model Essay
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Introduction
The maps illustrate significant changes in the seaside town of Seaville over a thirty-year period, from 1980 to 2010.
Overview
Overall, the village developed substantially from a holiday settlement to a permanent town over the 30-year period. Similarly, infrastructure and amenities increased, along with the town’s capacity to provide for tourists.
Body paragraph 1
In 1980, Seaville was tiny, attracting only a few tourists, who were accommodated in cottages or a small hotel. In contrast, East Bank was unspoilt. To the east of the cottages was a marsh, and there was woodland to the north. Regarding recreation, besides the beach, the town only offered a tea room.
Body paragraph 2
However, the village had grown dramatically by 2010. Retirement villages had been built to the west of the main road. The marsh had been drained and the cottages demolished in order to construct houses. To cater for tourists, both a new high-rise hotel and holiday cottages on East Bank had been constructed. The woodlands had been cleared and supplanted by a golf course. Similarly, a boat club had been built on the west bank of the river. New infrastructure was created to access East Bank. On the other hand, the town had preserved the original hotel.