The chart below shows the proportion of males and females in Malaysia who commonly do physical activity in 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary.
Write at least 150 words
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Last week, I tried to submit two of my poems by through the online submission form on your website. After I upload uploaded my files and click clicked the submit button, the page suddenly show showed an error and become became blank. I did not receive any confirmation email, so I am not sure if my poems was were received or not.
Could you please tell me about the status of my submissions? I worry that maybe they did not go through.
任务完成度
优点
这份反馈说明回应是否切题、组织是否清楚,以及语法、词汇和连贯性如何影响整体效果。请根据建议修正表达,并加入更具体的细节。
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整体组织
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弱点这份反馈说明回应是否切题、组织是否清楚,以及语法、词汇和连贯性如何影响整体效果。请根据建议修正表达,并加入更具体的细节。
支持内容的相关性与质量
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弱点这份反馈说明回应是否切题、组织是否清楚,以及语法、词汇和连贯性如何影响整体效果。请根据建议修正表达,并加入更具体的细节。
语法使用
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弱点这份反馈说明回应是否切题、组织是否清楚,以及语法、词汇和连贯性如何影响整体效果。请根据建议修正表达,并加入更具体的细节。
词汇使用
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连贯与衔接
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任务完成度 5/5
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整体组织 4/5
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支持内容的相关性与质量 4/5
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语法使用 2/5
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词汇使用 3/5
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连贯与衔接 4/5
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The chart below shows the proportion of males and females in Malaysia who commonly do physical activity in 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary.
Write at least 150 words
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The professor explain explains that the Chevalier was rich in assets, but poor in the cash, while he lived in Switzerland and had to occasionally borrow funds while waiting for its his assets to selling. Accordingly, sell. According to the professor, being low on cash fund funds is not the same as being financially poors. poor. However, in reading the reading, someone who borrowing borrows large of amounts of money could not be wealth, wealthy, therefore the Chevalier must have lied about his wealthy life in Switzerland.
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