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The Writing Task 2 of the IELTS Academic/General test requires you to write an essay in response to a point of view, argument or problem. You will be presented with a topic and will be tested on your ability to respond by giving and justifying an opinion, discussing the topic, summarizing details, outlining problems, identifying possible solutions and supporting what you write with reasons, arguments and relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

  • - Write in a formal style
  • - Write at least 250 words
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Write about the following topic:

It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university.  What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Write about the following topic:

It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university.  What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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4.5 / 6
Valutazione IA
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Coerenza
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I hope you are fine. My name is Philip and I am one of your reader. I really like your poetry magazine very much because the poems are very deep and emotional. Every time when I read the magazine, I feel inspired and peaceful. I also like that you give chance for new writers to share their works. It make me more confidence to send my poems.

Last week, I tried to submit two of my poems by the online submission form on your website. After I upload my files and click submit button, the page suddenly show error and become blank. I did not receive any confirmation email, so I am not sure my poems was received or not.

Could you please tell me about the status of my submissions? I worry that maybe they did not go through.
I hope you are fine. My name is Philip and I am one of your reader. readers. I really like your poetry magazine very much because the poems are very deep and emotional. Every time when I read the magazine, I feel inspired and peaceful. I also like that you give a chance for to new writers to share their works. It make makes me more confidence confident to send my poems.

Last week, I tried to submit two of my poems by through the online submission form on your website. After I upload uploaded my files and click clicked the submit button, the page suddenly show showed an error and become became blank. I did not receive any confirmation email, so I am not sure if my poems was were received or not.

Could you please tell me about the status of my submissions? I worry that maybe they did not go through.



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confidence
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fine.
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Philip
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Philip, Spiegazione: Grammatica.

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one
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readers.
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poetry magazine. Spiegazione: Grammatica.

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like your poetry magazine very much because
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very
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emotional. Every time I read the magazine, I feel
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like
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new writers
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new writers to
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works. It
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received or not.
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tell me about
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Completamento del compito   5/5

Spiegazione: Completamento del compito. Organizzazione generale. Pertinenza. Grammatica. Vocabolario. Coerenza.

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Organizzazione generale   4/5

Spiegazione: Completamento del compito. Organizzazione generale. Pertinenza. Grammatica. Vocabolario. Coerenza.

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Pertinenza   4/5

Spiegazione: Completamento del compito. Organizzazione generale. Pertinenza. Grammatica. Vocabolario. Coerenza.

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Grammatica   2/5

Spiegazione: Completamento del compito. Organizzazione generale. Pertinenza. Grammatica. Vocabolario. Coerenza.

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Vocabolario   3/5

Spiegazione: Completamento del compito. Organizzazione generale. Pertinenza. Grammatica. Vocabolario. Coerenza.

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Coerenza   4/5

Spiegazione: Completamento del compito. Organizzazione generale. Pertinenza. Grammatica. Vocabolario. Coerenza.

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Question:

Write about the following topic:

It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university.  What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.


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Several doubt about the accuracy of the memoir writting by the Chevalier de Seingalt are raised in the reading but the professor clarify the seeming contradictions in the Chevalier's accounts to defend the memoir.

The professor explain that the Chevalier rich in assets, but poor in the cash, while he lived in Switzerland and had to occasionally borrow funds while waiting for its assets to selling. Accordingly, to the professor, being low on cash fund is not same as being financially poors. However, in reading someone who borrowing large of amounts of money could not be wealth, therefore the Chevalier must have lied his wealthy life in Switzerland.

The skepticism regards the reliability of the recorded conversations with Voltaire is challenging by the professor as well. She explains that, due to habit of recording each conversation with Voltaire immediately afterward, the Chevalier was able to recall those discussions in detail even after several years had passing.

Finally, the professor refute the idea briber was how the Chevalier got out of prison. She point out that because even the other prisoners who had better resources were unable to successfully bribe their way out of prison it was very unlikely that bribery was how he escaped. Also, she notes the existences of government papers recording repair work done to the Chevalier's prison cell ceiling as strong evidence that his escaping from the prison was accurately recorded.
Several doubt doubts about the accuracy of the memoir writting written by the Chevalier de Seingalt are raised in the reading reading, but the professor clarify clarifies the seeming contradictions in the Chevalier's accounts to defend the memoir.

The professor explain explains that the Chevalier was rich in assets, but poor in the cash, while he lived in Switzerland and had to occasionally borrow funds while waiting for its his assets to selling. Accordingly, sell. According to the professor, being low on cash fund funds is not the same as being financially poors. poor. However, in reading the reading, someone who borrowing borrows large of amounts of money could not be wealth, wealthy, therefore the Chevalier must have lied about his wealthy life in Switzerland.

The skepticism regards regarding the reliability of the recorded conversations with Voltaire is challenging challenged by the professor as well. She explains that, due to the habit of recording each conversation with Voltaire immediately afterward, the Chevalier was able to recall those discussions in detail even after several years had passing. passed.

Finally, the professor refute refutes the idea briber that bribery was how the Chevalier got out of prison. She point points out that because even the other prisoners who had better resources were unable to successfully bribe their way out of prison prison, it was very unlikely that bribery was how he escaped. Also, she notes the existences existence of government papers recording repair work done to the Chevalier's prison cell ceiling as strong evidence that his escaping escape from the prison was accurately recorded.



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doubt
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doubts The plural form 'doubts' is needed here because there are multiple uncertainties being discussed.

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writting
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written The correct past participle of 'write' is 'written'.

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reading
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reading, A comma is needed after 'reading' to separate the two independent clauses.

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clarify
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clarifies The third person singular form 'clarifies' is needed to agree with the singular subject 'professor'.

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explain
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explains The third person singular form 'explains' is needed to agree with the singular subject 'professor'.

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was
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was The verb 'was' is needed to form the past continuous tense.

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the
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The article 'the' is not needed before 'assets'.

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its
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his The possessive pronoun 'his' is needed to refer back to 'the Chevalier'.

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selling. Accordingly,
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sell. According The verb 'sell' is needed here, and 'According' should start a new sentence.

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fund
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funds The plural form 'funds' is needed here because it refers to money in general.

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the
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the The article 'the' is needed before 'Chevalier'.

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poors.
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poor. The correct adjective form is 'poor'.

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reading
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the reading, The article 'the' is needed before 'reading', and a comma is needed to separate the two independent clauses.

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borrowing
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borrows The present simple tense 'borrows' is needed to describe a general situation.

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of
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The preposition 'of' is not needed here.

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wealth,
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wealthy, The adjective 'wealthy' is needed to describe 'the Chevalier'.

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about
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about The preposition 'about' is needed to introduce the topic of the sentence.

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regards
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regarding The preposition 'regarding' is needed to introduce the topic of the sentence.

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challenging
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challenged The past participle 'challenged' is needed to form the passive voice.

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the
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the The article 'the' is needed before 'Chevalier'.

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passing.
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passed. The past participle 'passed' is needed to form the past perfect tense.

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refute
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refutes The third person singular form 'refutes' is needed to agree with the singular subject 'professor'.

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briber
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that bribery The noun 'bribery' is needed to refer to the act of giving bribes.

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point
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points The third person singular form 'points' is needed to agree with the singular subject 'she'.

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prison
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prison, A comma is needed after 'prison' to separate the two independent clauses.

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existences
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existence The singular form 'existence' is needed because it refers to one specific thing.

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escaping
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escape The noun 'escape' is needed to refer to the act of escaping.
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